slipjig3: (hamlet 2 writing)
slipjig3 ([personal profile] slipjig3) wrote2009-11-02 09:14 am

The Noise of Endless Wars, Chapter 12 (first draft)

Chapter 12

And then there was a huge explosion, and everybody died. The End.


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Hrmm. That might need a bit of a rewrite. On the other hand, it'll save loads of time on chapters 13 through 17. Let me ponder this a while....

And apropos of nothing, I've got a zit on my left eyelid. This is decidedly unpleasant.

[identity profile] ewin.livejournal.com 2009-11-02 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Chapter 13

Deep in the primordial murk, a tiny pre-cellular structure was stirring...

[identity profile] slipjig.livejournal.com 2009-11-02 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Aiee. But I don't wanna write a James Michener novel!