slipjig3: (hamlet 2 writing)
slipjig3 ([personal profile] slipjig3) wrote2009-11-02 09:14 am

The Noise of Endless Wars, Chapter 12 (first draft)

Chapter 12

And then there was a huge explosion, and everybody died. The End.


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Hrmm. That might need a bit of a rewrite. On the other hand, it'll save loads of time on chapters 13 through 17. Let me ponder this a while....

And apropos of nothing, I've got a zit on my left eyelid. This is decidedly unpleasant.

[identity profile] slipjig.livejournal.com 2009-11-02 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll get there. This is a seriously talky chapter, as will be the next one, so I'm trying to keep this from getting eye-crossingly boring.