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Chapter 12

And then there was a huge explosion, and everybody died. The End.


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Hrmm. That might need a bit of a rewrite. On the other hand, it'll save loads of time on chapters 13 through 17. Let me ponder this a while....

And apropos of nothing, I've got a zit on my left eyelid. This is decidedly unpleasant.

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Date: 2009-11-02 02:25 pm (UTC)
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yes, rewrite, please

*cheer cheer cheer* :D

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Date: 2009-11-02 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slipjig.livejournal.com
I'll get there. This is a seriously talky chapter, as will be the next one, so I'm trying to keep this from getting eye-crossingly boring.
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